Poeme: Dominique (critique constructive uniquement merci ^^)

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Poeme: Dominique (critique constructive uniquement merci ^^)

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10-12-2004, 08:36 AM

Pour la 2ème strophe j'aurai plutot vu :

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Pour tous ceux

Voila ma contribution Wink

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Poeme: Dominique (critique constructive uniquement merci ^^) - by Razael - 10-11-2004, 07:19 PM

Poeme: Dominique (critique constructive uniquement merci ^^) - by Herr Magnus - 10-11-2004, 07:44 PM

Poeme: Dominique (critique constructive uniquement merci ^^) - by Razael - 10-12-2004, 08:14 AM

Poeme: Dominique (critique constructive uniquement merci ^^) - by Kiouioui - 10-12-2004, 08:19 AM

Poeme: Dominique (critique constructive uniquement merci ^^) - by Herr Magnus - 10-12-2004, 08:23 AM

Poeme: Dominique (critique constructive uniquement merci ^^) - by Razael - 10-12-2004, 08:35 AM

Poeme: Dominique (critique constructive uniquement merci ^^) - by Cadrach - 10-12-2004, 08:36 AM

Poeme: Dominique (critique constructive uniquement merci ^^) - by Razael - 10-12-2004, 08:45 AM

Poeme: Dominique (critique constructive uniquement merci ^^) - by dimitri - 10-12-2004, 09:02 AM

Poeme: Dominique (critique constructive uniquement merci ^^) - by Razael - 10-12-2004, 09:18 AM

Poeme: Dominique (critique constructive uniquement merci ^^) - by Razael - 10-12-2004, 07:36 PM

Poeme: Dominique (critique constructive uniquement merci ^^) - by Herr Magnus - 10-13-2004, 01:21 PM

Poeme: Dominique (critique constructive uniquement merci ^^) - by Razael - 10-13-2004, 03:07 PM

Poeme: Dominique (critique constructive uniquement merci ^^) - by Mazirian - 10-13-2004, 07:03 PM

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